answer:
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explanation:
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This is my Commemorative speech for my English class.
The name Ella, meaning “a beautiful fairy woman” or “light”, was an exact description of my best friend, Ella Schriner. She has helped me through all of my ups and downs, and all of my good and bad days. We both suffer from mental disorders, and we both have experienced trauma in our lifetime, but that does not stop us from being there for eachother. A good friend can have many definitions but mine, I believe, is precise. A good friend is always there for you even when other people are not, and they comfort you through all of the rough days. They laugh, they cry, they hurt with you...and that is what really matters. Personally, I have really bad anxiety and minor depression because of all of the trauma I have experienced in my life. My father had left my mother and I when I was just born, and I would never forgive him; But Ella has shown me that I do not need a bad influence in my life; and that if he will forget about me, then I shall forget about him. Ella showed me how to stop stressing over something that will never come back. She has taught me how to be a better person, and therefore she is not considered my friend….she is my family. Ella, oh Ella, I wish I could explain to you how much you mean to me but I just cannot find the right words because there are so many to describe you with; but all I would like to say to you is….”Thank You”.
I love how you describe how close Ella is to your heart, and how you expressed your feelings towards Ella. I also love how you effortlessly transitioned to the conclusion. I think it looks amazing so far! There are a few grammar errors that you could easily fix, but other than that, I think it's great! Personally, I think you could change the part where you said "They laugh, they cry, they hurt with you" because in my opinion, it isn't gramatically correct. I also wanted to point out that the quotes around the "Thank you" you put in the end is not placed properly, but you could easily fix that. I hope this helps! <3
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storm.
A immensity
B imensity
С imencity
D immencity
Answer:
A.) immensity
Explanation:
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Instructions: The following argument argues for spending taxpayer money to colonize the moon. Read the argument and answer the question that follows:
Topic and Question
Space Travel: Should our society spend taxpayer money to colonize the moon?
Ineffective Argument
I love space. It rocks.
It is super important to colonize the moon because we will run out of room on earth. My neighbor who grows organic vegetables says that we are ruining the earth’s environment and we will need a new place to live. I totally agree.
I think that another reason we should colonize the moon is that it would be cool. Can you imagine living up there and being able to see the earth? Wow. My best friend says that living on the moon would be an awesome experience for anyone.
The moon is great!
Why is the argument ineffective? In a paragraph of 7–10 complete sentences, explain why the following parts of the argument are ineffective, and how they can be improved:
Claim
Support
Conclusion Clincher
Point of View
Transitions
Submit your review of the argument. Do not write a complete argumentative essay.
Claim- weak and to oppinionated
Support- informal, gramaticly inaccurate, uses words like "cool" and "Totally", uses evidence from an irrelevant source
Conclusion- not really a conclusion. one sentence is not a conclusion and it doesnt sum up the rest of the argument.
pov- is written in first person when it should be written in third person.
Transitions- no transitions
Answer:
The claim for this article is very weak and oppinionated, and when you are writing an article you can not have opinions, but facts. Some evidence that this is weak is that it is informal and gramatically inaccurate, using words such as "cool", or "totally" rather than using proper grammer and would not need to even include simaller words if he had a proper article with trustable sources. This also uses information from a irrelevent sources, including his friend and neighbor. This also includes to transitions whatsover, which are nessacary to thread the article together neatly. Transitions would have also helped the article stay more relevent, rather than just stating random opinions and statments, as well as not thinking about the format and length of the article. As for the point of view, it is written from the "author's" perspective, otherwise known as first person view when it should have been written in third person view. Finally for the conclusion, at first it seems there was nowhere to be found because, there is not. All it has for a conclusion is one sentence (The moon is great!) that does not even include a small summary of the entire article which is what a proper conclusion is.
Read the passage and use the drop-down menus to choose the best transitional words and phrases to maintain
meaning and link ideas.
Transitions (or signal words) are words and phrases that show the connection between ideas. ... Common signal words show emphasis, addition, comparison or contrast, illustration, and cause and effect.
Explanation:
Choose the appropriate conjunctions to join the parallel structures.
the manager her staff informed the public that they had been nominated for the award.
Neither.......nor
Not only.....but also
Either........r
o either ... and
Answer:
Neither,,,......... ,, nor
Answer: I think it's neither....nor
how is childhood presented in “poem at thirty nine”? make reference to language, form and structure
Answer:
‘Poem at Thirty-Nine’ by Alice Walker describes the speaker’s father’s life. She admits how much she misses him and how she wishes he hadn’t had such a hard life.
Explanation:
Should students be required to learn a musical instrument?
Answer:
Learning to play a musical instrument helps shape your personality, which is essential especially for students in junior forms. It teaches them key skills such as how to manage their time, how to be responsible, and how to balance their studies with extracurricular activities.
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“Don't be pushed by your problems, be led by your dreams. ”- Ralph Waldo Emerson
Read and respond to the quote. Do you agree or disagree with the quote? How can the quote relate to or impact YOUR life?
Answer:
Don’t let your problems rule you, learn to rule them. Accept the issues you have, find strategies, implement them, and solve. Learn to let go of things you can’t fix; it will drain you and disallow you to move forward with what you can accomplish. Follow your dreams, and they will lead you in the direction you want to go. Concentrate on the positive that you can change instead of the negative that you can’t. I agree with the quote. If you are having a bad day with many conflicts instead of being frustrated and angry, you can accept s them and find ways to solve them or just to let go of them.
Explanation:
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imagine you were taking a trip to outer space. Describe what it's like and tell what kinds of things you do when you get there.
make up your own story .. and it's for reading but there is no reading..!
Unlike informational writing, literature may persuade by doing which of the following?
Select one:
a.
giving factual information about the lives of characters
b.
inspiring empathy in the lives of characters
c.
using illogical arguments
d.
making false claims
Answer:
Choice B
inspiring empathy in the lives of characters
in the book The Watsons go to Birmingham, what are 2 examples of a hyperbole in chapter 5.
Answer:
1. I have been here for a million years
2. He must have finished his homework ages ago.
What is chemical reaction?
Answer:
Look below
Explanation:
It is a process that involves rearrangement of the molecular or ionic structure of a substance, as opposed to a change in physical form or a nuclear reaction.
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why does plastic waste contribute a lot to emviromental pollution
Because it affects habitations around forest and sea life. It can kill animals that are unaware of the plastic material by the means of choking or snapping small bones.
put but Or so the gaps
but the food is terrible.
so only rich people go there.
so I don't have much free time.
but I'm not making much progress.
so I can write to her.
but I haven't got her phone number.
so we went to the seaside.
but the sea was too cold.
but they wanted to eat in a restaurant.
so they couldn't go to a restaurant.
so I went to the police station.
but I found 10 in my pocket.
Reread these two quotations about creativity. You can't use up creativity. The more you use, the more you have. -- Maya Angelou We have to continually be jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down. ― Kurt Vonnegut Which statement is best supported by these quotations?
This question is missing the answer choices. I have found them online. They are the following:
1. Creativity is limitless and never-ending.
2. Only those who take risks can be creative.
3. In order to be creative, you must be reckless.
4. There is a time limit on our creativity.
Answer:
The statement which is best supported by the quotations is:
1. Creativity is limitless and never-ending.
Explanation:
Both Maya Angelou and Kurt Vonnegut were famous authors. Angelou was a civil-rights activist and poet born in Missouri in 1928. Vonnegut was born in Indiana in 1922, and his stories famously used satire and postmodern elements.
Even though the two quotes sound very different, they are both describing creativity as limitless. Angelou says it in a more direct way: the more we use creativity, the more we have it. It is never-ending. Vonnegut, on the other hand, uses a metaphor to say the same thing. If creativity is like jumping off a cliff, we must keep on doing it over and over again. Creativity is not something you use or do only once. It is continuous. For those reasons, the best option seems to be number 1. Creativity is limitless and never-ending.
NOTE: The question asks for only one statement. However, in case more than one option can be chosen, number 2 could also be checked.
In line 33, on page 3, what is the effect of
comparing the subject of the poem to Odysseus,
the Greek warrior who fought in the Trojan War
and spent many years trying to voyage home?
The speaker is criticizing the subject of the poem
for not taking care of matters at home.
The speaker is celebrating the adventures they
have had together
The speaker is suggesting that the subject of the
poem is brave
The speaker is suggesting that their relationship
has grown distant
Answer:
It's 'the speaker is suggesting that the subject of the poem is brave'.
Explanation:
Odysseus was a famous warrior, featuring in the Odyssey by Homer, as well as the Illiad. He was praised for his courage, strength and intelligence in times of hardship, so being compared to him would suggest that the subject of the poem is also courageous and brave. Hope this helps!
The correct answer is: B) and spent many years trying to voyage home?
How can the above be justified?
The Main essence behind the story of Odysseus is the motivation of love and the strong attachment to home.The other options don't justify it, rather have information unrelated to the topic given, hence it is important to ensure that clarification is done through the main essence of the story.Who is Odysseus?
Odysseus, also known by the Latin variant Ulysses is a legendary Greek king of Ithaca and the hero of Homer's epic poem the Odyssey. Odysseus also plays a key role in Homer's IliadFor further information on Odysseus:
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You are going to give a speech to your peers at your school asking to be elected school president. For this event, it is most
important to
A)
be clever.
B)
be appealing.
C)
show that you are highly educated.
Eliminate
D)
show that you know a lot of people.
Where does the majority of the action of the play take place?
A. Mantua, Italy
C. Verona, Italy
B. Rome, Italy
D. London, England
Answer:
is there a reading or...
Tortillas and poetry. They go hand in hand. Books nourish the spirit, bread nourishes our bodies. Our distinct cultures nourish each one of us, and as we know more and more about the art and literature of the different cultures, we become freer and freer. . . .I don’t know anyone who doesn’t like to sample different ethnic foods, the breads of many many groups; just as many of us enjoy sampling books from different areas of the world. I travel to foreign countries, and I know more about myself as I learn more about my fellow human beings. Censorship imposes itself in my path of knowledge, and that activity can be justified by no one.Which phrase from the excerpt best helps the reader identify the author’s purpose?
Answer:
"Censorship imposes itself in my path of knowledge, and that activity can be justified by no one. "
Explanation:
When reading the text shown above, we can see that the author's purpose is to persuade the reader to believe that censorship of books should be combated, as it limits knowledge to other cultures, in addition to preventing people from having access to different narratives, being able to take advantage of new, reflective and well-established ideas because they point out very relevant subjects. This purpose is very evident when the author presents the sentence: "Censorship imposes itself in my path of knowledge, and that activity can be justified by no one. "
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What is the preposition word for the sentence "Scott's allergies were really severe. this reason, he was having a lot of trouble _____ them."
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What is the pace of Justice Sotomayor's commencement speech at New York
University?
Justice was traded from the Indians to the Yankees on June 29, 2000 for Ricky Ledee, Jake Westbrook, and Zach Day. He was a member of the 2000 World Series winning team. He played the 2001 season with the Yankees, then was traded to the New York Mets in December of 2001 for Robin Ventura.
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Doves are cooking, bees buzzing and cattle lowing. I know this is an onomotopoeia but I need to explain the sentence
Answer:
doves are cooking meaning doves are cooking in the kitchen I guess or getting cooked. Then bees buzzing meaning there's bees buzzing flying around making there regular noise. Lastly cattle lowing means there's cattle making their noise also so basically it just a lot going on and a whole bunch of noise.
Explanation:
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And No links!! I repeat No links!!
Answer:
finite
Explanation:
finite means a limited amount
On page 4, what does the phrase "a
rare gem" suggest about Lord Henley's
feelings about the fossil?
Lord Henley feels that the fossil is an
important scientific discovery.
Lord Henley feels proud that he can
afford such an expensive fossil.
Lord Henley feels that the fossil could be
worth as much as a prized jewel.
Lord Henley feels surprised that the fossil
is pretty like a precious stone.
Lord Henley feels that the fossil is an important scientific if I'm not incorrect
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Answer:
1) is baking
2) am reading
3) is teaching
4)crying
5) am feeling
6) repenting
7) are criticizing
8) is entering
9) looking
10) standing
11) is catching
12) arriving
13) am flying
14) is treating
15) are coming
what is a question you have about fear?
Answer:
Can fear take over your whole mind at once, and how do you get it to go away?
Explanation:
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romeo drinks poison when he find Juliet dead, thinking he will enter the afterlife and be with her
What genre would The Crucible be considered?
A novel
A play
A written documentary
An epic poem
Answer:
the crucible is a play